This is absolutely Great
It's fantastic. If you continue on like this and your last spike test, you will have a great game on you hands. I can't say enough of how great you did, and I am in eager anticipation for the final product. The only question is; are you going to make a platformer, a puzzle game, or minigame style like the one on hubworld. Personally, I would love to see all three, something kind of like Super Mario Brothers Superstar Saga in how it incorporated wonderful platforming, RPG, and minigames into the story. If you need help with ideas, writing, or music, send me a message, I would be glad to help! My profile has some music on it, but it's mostly for RPG's, and it's not very good. But soon I will have Fruity Loops, and then I can help with all the power a brony can muster! Anyway, awesome upload, and I hope to see more of you in the future.